All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 21'

by BigZeke13

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What a great chapter

Aunt Jane and Julia were a great addition. It was very funny that Dee fucked Hunter before Jarrod got to after the ceremony. I give it 5* Can't wait for the next wedding.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great chapter

Joanne should eat Hunter's ass the next time they meet up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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A lot of fun action. Some of the scenes were a bit unrealistic - especially Hunter’s inability to last even after repeated orgasms. Needed a bit more variation and subtlety in the lovemaking scenes.

shyspudshyspudover 3 years ago

truly wonderful...so well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
exceptional!

Another chapter in this sensational series is a superior reading experience. Wonderful characters and an engaging plot retain the attention of the reader throughout, and the amazing love scenes truly enhance the development of the story while never becoming needlessly repetitive or domineering. This outstanding storytelling fully deserves a five stars rating.

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