All Comments on 'Pool Fun'

He never sodomizes her (that means 'in the ass' if you didn't know). So she can't really enjoy it if he isn't doing it.

Thanks Anonymous. I was a bit doubtful if 'sodomize' was the word, but I was in a very lazy mood that day so thanks for clearing that up.

please do write a continuation or at least more like this one, its amazing.

Bahahaha - I will never forget that

ending in my life! Classic! Shot for

hot story.

Very nice. I got off big time. I look forward to reading more from you. And I hope you are able to find the big, fat cock you crave. I wish I could give it to you, but I have a small dick.

I really love this story. I have read this and the sequel so many times now.... It would be so awesome if there was a third part

Very poorly written. Probably by a teenager. Needs an editor, too many mistakes. ( "...be in effect in 20 minutes" ? Lighting doesn't "be in effect"...) And inane, long-winded narration of just a trash story.