All Comments on 'Pool Goddess'

Thank you for a delicious and well crafted story. I am now all hot and bothered!

It was perfect. It had the perfect format with not too long of paragraphs and nice flowing sentences. It had a great storyline that was very hott and really got me going. I am not sure if you decided to do a second chapter to this but I sure hope you do because I would be really interested to read it. Great Job! A really hott and well written story!

"The sex would be her tip." .....I chuckled at the bikini with the hat and shirt as her work attire, but I enjoyed the story. Good luck.

Great little yarn! Like the work uniform too.

The next time you're going to write a story this hot, you're going to have to visit the Midwest to take care of the "aftereffects." ;-)

Great story, reminded me of tara reid