All Comments on 'Pool Party Ch. 01'

needs more plot development. He hasn't seen her in years and she's ok with him just groping her in front of her friends and then fucking her the instant they leave?

I'd agree that it needs more development, it felt rushed. But I disagree with the earlier comment. I once hooked up with I guy I barely knew in a bathroom at a party with a lot of people around and think this was a pretty cool and kinky start. Maybe a little more backstory. Good start Ferris!!