All Comments on 'Pool Party Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
wrong listing

Anytime there's anal sex the story belongs in that group not elsewhere. Damn its getting harder and harder to find simple good stories as authors all seem to find it required or mandated to include anal sex or the story isn't finished or can be posted.

MegamuffinMegamuffinalmost 9 years ago
Fun stuff.

I would have kept reading for more pages, or chapters, if they were there. I wouldn't worry about Anon's weird anal complaint. I think group sex trumps anal on the overlapping category hierarchy. I'm just glad nobody played Truth or Dare. Talk about tired gimmick.

edwards21edwards21almost 9 years ago
I want more

This is a fucking masterpiece. I really like these characters, to boot, I'd love to read more of their adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great story! Where is the pool party? I am there!

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