All Comments on 'Poor and Proud'

very good.i've been one of your critics about weak men in your stories,but this was good.

Always a pleasure to read one of your stories and this one is among your best.

Boyd

Very touching story. Thank you.

Thank you for this heart-melting story. Life goes on.

a nasty man, which is closer to a bully than a strong man. <p>

a strong man does not need to call people names like a little 6 year-old boy. it's not just calling people names, he makes fun of another man's name. <p>

such a prick will get his lower jaw knocked sideways if he should meet up with a bully. <p>

the wifey fucking other man is a problem in and of itself. the other man's name has nothing to do with it. just because he doesn't try to attack a man like this wimpy husband, immediately, dodn't mean nothing: if pushed any further, he could simply come in the dark and slice his dick and balls off and feed them to the dogs. <p>

why the fuck would Kim or any other man refuse a woman who is willing to fuck them? AFTER ALL, this husband is, within a few days of working, JAMMING his hand into the panties of the woman who came to try to save his company! but unlike his whore wife, that woman was honourable, despite this dickhead's attempts. <p>

"now, I see I am still falling deeper into my black hole." I mean, what the fuck is that gibberish nonsense? Kim likely didn't even jam his head into Nathelie's panties: she goes willingly to him.... so why blame Kim for one's whoring wife? <p>

and people say this guy is a true, tough, and real man? LOL knuckleheads!

Your stories continue to get better and while

there will always be some vultures waiting to

"pick,pick,pick",please believe they are the small

minority.

Ah, Winterfrog, I am a fan. Thank you for this delightful story with a happy ending. Our hero was no bully. He is a man who played with the Kim name, avoiding the usual physical confrontation. Coming to blows would have been childish and silly. He used wit instead and I loved it.

No, Natalie, the grass was not greener on the other side.

This is truly a Love Story. I'm amazed at the way it first captured my attention and then pulled me along from the black hole of tragedy to the happy wedding. You write well. Thanks for this one. Ron

I think Camilla really pulled him from a blackhole.. This reads that they didn't expect him to become close to Elise during the evening, just be a conversation partner.. So Nathaliee has been out screwing Kim for months and now wants to come back to him.. He had to reject that idea.. But things just slowly improved and I'll bet Elise became the towns first lady, eventually, like Nathalie before her.. Good read WF..

There were a few problems I noted, but nothing that wasn't over-come by the point of the story. I did find it un-necessary him making fun of his wifes lovers name, this seemed childish to me, and having to do a back story of why this guy would be scared of the husband because of some show of machismo at a previous function was unnecessary and tedious. Further having him do it again in front of his new lady was childish, and acting like a bully is not something a woman would appreciate in a potential mate. It came off as petty and un-endearing at best.Still, in all I enjoyed it, and will look for your stories in the future.

Now, that's what I call a good story. -- by Thor

I have always enjoyed your stories and with each one your both your talent for writing and your command of the English language has improved. This was an excellent story on many levels. Well done.

What a wonderful story. You're an excellent writer and I love the way your story turns out. --Jim

This guy has to be a candidate for the title of the luckiest

guy on the continent.... His wife was a real piece work.

The new wife had been there done that and wanted no more of that. The company is as many companies was walking a line, it needed new markets and new direction and got both. And excellent story.

Not the first time I read it but still GOOD! Enjoy your WORK!!

The "svinglish" translation is most annoying to read. I would suggest a better translator!!!

Really like yr stories.

A very nice story.

The shit have hit the fan in an asylum for insane!!!

although this is Literotica and economic matters have backseat to that of heart and libido, the author skillfully wove in troubled business plot thread in just the right amount so it didn't dominate from personal aspect.

The verdict us this story is easy read that's stronger for being reflective of current economic tough times with ultimately optimistic outlook.

Your IQ certainly matches it ! (fucking Poms)

All of it including the blind date with a secret bet2een them that led to much more -

Very nice story well told thank you

This story has a very real life feel to it. Of course, there are definite language translation issues but it didn't derail the essence of the story. Thanks for a great story.

A peaceful divorce and a happy ending. At least for the husband. A work of fiction which could be real life. Excellent.

but with a loving family and support...you never have to be either, TK U MLJ LV NV

I always struggle with your English but this was entertaining. Good to see he came out on top.

Story was good without it though. 4* .

the other comes naturally TK U MLJ LV NV

No one does it quite like Winterfrog. Can't believe I missed this one in my studious Winterfrog marathon a couple of years ago.

One of you Swedes up there has to get Winterfrog back on track. Someone needs to give him a kick in the arse to start him writing again.

We want Winterfrog! We want Winterfrog!

Bravo..........bloody bravo

Who else can write in English with a Scandinavian accent. A great and imaginative storyteller.

Well what happened to Natalie?.

Stickler for non cheating that was cheating on his part

My favorite Scandinavian writer.

Honestly, I don't know of any other.

that natalie was relegated politely into, 'the mother of my children'.

she not only cheated on her husband both emotionally and physically, but abandoned him the very first time things got rough for them. what's more, she never felt sorry nor guilty about any of it. even in her pitiful confession to him after all the fires died down her only regret was him finding out about it.

she was selfish to her core, and completely useless. she happily agreed to giving up some of her shared custody time with their kids. that speaks poorly to her character even more.

she put no effort and no passion into any aspect of their relationship. she deserves non what-so-ever in kind. i love that her weak attempts to 'win him back', where met with an indifferent shrug. she's got to be feeling like the loser she's accused him of being. she gave up every single time it got hard, that's a true loser. effort is a winner's attitude. and her ex husband had that in spade.s

Enjoyed the well written story.

YOU NEED AN EDITOR TOO!

Nice story, but I don't think Nathalie having dinner with her ex & asking to get back together fits the characters.

Nathalie is a selfish, self-centered, egoistical woman who only wants to be married to money & be the social center of attention wherever she lives. The way she treated her husband was over the top...no repentance, no guilt, no delay in saying she was staying with her lover at the hotel. She is also not committed to being a mother...trying to get less days of visitation during the divorce? Her bad mothering would only get worse as the twins got older requiring her to take them to their activities, etc. Finally, because of her character...she would not have tried to get back with her ex. First, her ex's company had not recovered at that time or would any time soon. Next her goals in life had not changed. She wanted to live with plenty of money & the social center of attention. No, she would have found another sugar-daddy that would be wealthy & allow her to be the center of society.

It is OK and realistic but too plain and hardly anything to write about. The description of falling to "black hole" was good.

@SAV12 - you need a keyboard with lowercase characters.

Gold digger Natalie, pure and simple

Very good story. I thought I had read everything by this author but I was wrong. Wonderful tale that I enjoyed. I have to agree with dark2donut2 that"SAV12 Needs a different keyboard,and a shower as it's he that stinks. LP

very nice

One of your better ones! I think we Americans like reading your stories more than the scores would suggest because they give us glimpses into a different culture.

Kim

Name is from parents. Hopefully someone named Kim as the soccer star kicks your ass.

Any guy named Kim most likely is a Soy Boy. They portray themselves as "bad asses" but are actually delicate pansies!

They should MAN up & change the name, just because mommy named her little mistake Kim, does not mean he/she has to live with the name their whole life.

Story had it's moments, 2 at most!

Thank you for a very enjoyable read.

PS: I have no problems with your ESL. It adds a flavor beyond the different culture and adds uniqueness. VG!