All Comments on 'Poor Becca Ch. 04'

A great series so far, I hope your imagination is up to writing some further chapters in Beccas journey?

The title might have qualified for the first and maybe the second chapter, but Becca seems to be able to land on her feet more and more.

As a 'descent into...' type story goes, I'm really enjoying this one.

You manage to balance both the rawness of the sex itself with the rawness of the feelings and emotions involved excellently.

This is not something everybody knows how to do, but it's definitely something that tends to make stories more vivid, more visceral and you do it well.

Can't wait to see where this story goes next.

Congrats, you've got an excellent story on your hands here.

A really hot set of stories. Well done. Maybe Becca could be indiscreet again and find her mother on the receiving end of punishment.

Brilliant addition to previous chapters...cannot think what comes next! No need to restrain her now, she is into it all they can and will do...totally compliant.

Good writing, draws the reader in, feel as if we are there!

That was a great role reversal.

I admit to skipping over the guy bits, but your lesbian scenes are superb. The role reversal was well executed, and I look forward to learning more of Lexa’s Backstory.

I’m speechless

That doesn’t happen often

Bravo

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Holy shit, this one was hot. I discovered your stories last week and I've been enjoying them, but you really outdid yourself here. Lexa screaming "Rape me" over and over again will definitely stay with me for some time. I might go to hell for enjoying that, but I suppose I won't be the only one. Thanks again for sharing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Delightful to see Poor Becca taking more control of her sexual life, and enjoying her new adventures. The roudabout-fuck is a novel innovation that highlights this wonderful episode. Has this device been used in Porn...? If not, maybe Becca should take out a patent?