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"Dis is what I will do." she reached out and put the key on the dashboard in front of me. "Ah jes leave the key here. In the morning this park see a lot of joggers and dog walkers comin through."
"what the fuck?" she can't fucking be serious. I could go to jail.
"I'm sure one of them'll notice you and unlock you."
And with that she opened the drivers door and started to get out and I lost it again. "Come ON! Don't do this! Unlock me NOW god damn it!" she just continued reaching for the open door to help her up "You stupid fucking bitch! I didn't really want to fuck you in the first place!"
She stopped with one foot on the ground and turned around to look at me. She didn't look as angry as I would have expected. Perhaps because she knew she still had the upper hand. "OK, now what Imma do is start yo' car, turn on the lights, turn on yo' radio to full volume and leave this door open so all the people who lives around here can look out they windows and see who the fool be makin all the ruckus." she paused and asked "you want that motherfucker?"
I press my lips together in anger and just glared at her. There's just nothing I can do to stop her. She sat there with key in the ignition. The warning bell was going ding, ding, ding.
"You got anything to say?"
I'm so furious I could cry and in fact one tear does drop from my right eye but nevertheless, I take a deep breath and say "I'm sorry."
"For what?"
"I'm sorry for disrespecting you" I said quietly.
She smiled and looked at me then said "have a nice night" and smooched the air at me. She removed the car keys from the ignition and dropped them on the drivers seat and slammed the door.
Even after all I had just been through, as she walked away, I watched as she passed through street lights to see if I could get a last look at the boobs that got me into this mess before she disappeared into the darkness.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoSeriously, why did I even waste my time reading this?! Melinda was a stereotype even down to her vernacular and quite frankly, you should be ashamed of yourself!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoGood grief! Melinda was just awful, really poor character development. A black woman's stereotype x100. Just a Jigaboo. It's just disgusting.
Anonymousover 7 years agoAwful trash. You're a very stupid person if you believe this is how a story is supposed to be. Obviously you skipped grade school when they teach you about plot and all of that. Dumb writers are the worst writers, and you are a very awful writer.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoWould have been better with actual sex, but this was pretty good. Sad to hear about there won' be a sequel, but also glad to hear you are still around
