All Comments on 'Poor Simon Ch. 02'

Like your style

I love this story!

This is a really good story, I can't wait to read more of it

Wow it really does pull you in. The depth of the emotions of both of the characters is intriguing.... onto the next chapter :)

And I couldn't handle it.

Hopefully I will be able to read it fully one day since many people liked it.

Was their a particular reason that you chose to have the "black girl" give the contemptous looks to Simon? As a reader of color, it seems stereotypical to depict African-Americans as negative or angry. There are infinite ways of describing characters and such a variety of ethnicities. Yet, you chose an African-American for this behavior without giving any backstory or explanation than her race. If there had been a plot reason, then I would have felt fine accepting it. Without a plot driven reason, it seems to be a simple stereotype that I found hurtful as I read an otherwise well written piece.

It just gets better and better for Simon, he is such a lucky young man.

It just gets better and better for Simon, he is such a lucky young man.

I've been masturbating to this series so much that my penis is almost red

Don't want to think about why I like this series so much but I really, really do!