by RallyWeasel
Loved the story. Cant wait for the the next part!!! Writing was wonderful21B5
Really loved it all. The writing style was very good, I liked how it was almost jumpy in some parts but not in a bad way, it got you into the head of Stacy. Really liked her downward spiral into alcoholism and getting tattooed.
Perhaps our poor heroine can turn the tables with her next troublesome student? Or her life could take an even darker turn, being whored out for money by Darren's pal.
good story line - not over the top, but nicely controlling. more like this please :-)
Good story, liked it a lot. As with your other stories a sequel would be in order.
Very good story. Loved the "Stacy grew to regard all her male students as digital voyeurs" realization.
Grammar and spelling better than 98% of stories - congratulations! It is refreshing to not have to slog through atrocious spelling and just really stupid wording. Writing style was very good. However, transitions were poor. All in all, an excellent job.
That's right folks, a newly graduated teacher is somehow hired to teach high school. No time spent as a teaching assistant. No time as a substitute. No time spent instructing lower grade levels. Obviously she's a prodigy and would be the pride of her district, but somehow an imbecile student, enabled by the lack of focus from a lunk-headed principal, is able to take advantage of her by spouting some erroneous crap about how if a "single" student fails, it would mean her job. Ha!
This is some seriously stupid shit. More likely she would file a grievance against the principal with the teacher's union and the district would shrug their shoulders at the failing student or would preemptively expel him to keep him from endangering their "drop out" retention percentages. I love it when people who crap all about a subject try to use it as a basis for a story. If you hadn't turned off the ratings, I would have given this 3 stars because it did make me laugh.
Actually new teachers without experience get jobs all the time...it's called Alternate Route. Second, it's a good stroke story...I don't need accuracy on that.
I thought your story was very good. Can't wait to read more.