All Comments on 'Poor Teacher'

by RallyWeasel

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
Remarkably

well-written

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
loved it

Loved the story. Cant wait for the the next part!!! Writing was wonderful21B5

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excelent!

Excelent! flowed nice and I loved the story line

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Really loved it all. The writing style was very good, I liked how it was almost jumpy in some parts but not in a bad way, it got you into the head of Stacy. Really liked her downward spiral into alcoholism and getting tattooed.

Perhaps our poor heroine can turn the tables with her next troublesome student? Or her life could take an even darker turn, being whored out for money by Darren's pal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Really well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

nice !! got me glued to the screen

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
liked it a lot

good story line - not over the top, but nicely controlling. more like this please :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well written

Good story, liked it a lot. As with your other stories a sequel would be in order.

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervalmost 10 years ago
great job

Very good story. Loved the "Stacy grew to regard all her male students as digital voyeurs" realization.

twzircontwzirconover 9 years ago
Origonal and creative plot line

Grammar and spelling better than 98% of stories - congratulations! It is refreshing to not have to slog through atrocious spelling and just really stupid wording. Writing style was very good. However, transitions were poor. All in all, an excellent job.

verbicideverbicideabout 9 years ago
Ha, Ha!!

That's right folks, a newly graduated teacher is somehow hired to teach high school. No time spent as a teaching assistant. No time as a substitute. No time spent instructing lower grade levels. Obviously she's a prodigy and would be the pride of her district, but somehow an imbecile student, enabled by the lack of focus from a lunk-headed principal, is able to take advantage of her by spouting some erroneous crap about how if a "single" student fails, it would mean her job. Ha!

This is some seriously stupid shit. More likely she would file a grievance against the principal with the teacher's union and the district would shrug their shoulders at the failing student or would preemptively expel him to keep him from endangering their "drop out" retention percentages. I love it when people who crap all about a subject try to use it as a basis for a story. If you hadn't turned off the ratings, I would have given this 3 stars because it did make me laugh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
New Teachers

Actually new teachers without experience get jobs all the time...it's called Alternate Route. Second, it's a good stroke story...I don't need accuracy on that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very good story

I thought your story was very good. Can't wait to read more.

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