by Hush_
Very refreshing; but one suggestion. Dad DOESN'T love her, he loves abusing her. There is a difference and he's smart enough (and honest enough) to admit which it is. Keep up the good work.
While I hope she gets revenge on her rapist, the truth is, she is likely to be broken-mentally, emotionally and physically.
love this story! and i'm a female, and have cum several times reading it. keep on writing.
Great job! I like it even better than chapter 1. Forcing Poppy to participate is wonderfully cruel. I can't wait to see what you dream up next :)
Love to read a good sick fuck story and this one is excellent in it's sickness and mind fuckery.
I'm curious to see where it will go. Don't stop!
This is exquisitely perfect. I love how the story is unfolding. Don't stop now!
I've read both chapters and I'm really impressed. The story is simply mesmerizing, I can't get it off my head. His selfishness and cruelty towards his own daughter are matched only by his lustful and passionate behavior, resulting in a completely one-sided exposure of carnal pleasure. However I do feel sorry for Poppy, being turned into a mere instrument to fulfill her father's perversions but sadly for her I hope there will be more chapters.
I am in awe with your story. Until today I've read it a couple times and I'm still in love with your work of fiction.
And I also have to second another opinion that has been given: I, as a female reader, love that your victim doesn't enjoy her ordeal in the end.
Please surprise us with more of your fantasies and post more stories here.
I would like to be Poppy. The firmness of her father, his complete focus on his needs and desires...really a turn on.
And twisted mind to do that to his own daughter or anyone else, hope she find him asleep and cuts his dick off watching him slowly bleed to death.
This is easily one of my favorite stories....it's deliciously fucked up. Would love to get to know you better, if you're not going to continue writing stories.
only way this would be good is if it ends with her punching him in the face and watching him slowly bleed to death.
Perfect continuation! I wish there was more but it is clear that hush_ hasn't been around for a while, which is a real loss. But thank you anyway for leaving us with this incredibly hot story xx
This is a very powerful story!
Great imagination and I'm waiting for new chapters!
You have a new fan!
LAlienDD
Not the daddy/daughter story I was expecting to read, especially since this is my second time reading it. Wonder how I felt when I read it the first time around. I must be just as perverted as the others in wondering if you are writing more chapters to this sic father story. Geezzz
Okay, this sucks, do you understand? I do not possess a fancy-pansy time inverter and it is therefore impossible to harass or intimidate you into writing at least one more tiny chapter. Just one. But nooo...!!! It of course had to be written in 1613 BC, before they even had bloody computers. Probably scanned it off of a rock or a banana leaf or something. Great. I'll just have to read ch1 again.