All Comments on 'Porsche on Parade'

by Bentmind42

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
bentmind?

Nothing bent about it.

What a lovely story to begin my day with.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cute idea

I liked the idea. The lack of editing really began to bother me as I plowed on. I was unaware that a 911 had a back seat, and Porche was probably too tall to pull off the activities within as described. A thorough proof-read would have made a big difference to this story.

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