All Comments on 'Port and Refill Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well Done

A good story evokes emotion. It has been a while, this story made me feel. Thankyou.

audovoiceaudovoiceover 8 years ago
Interesting Personalities

I am not all that interested in superheroes as a premise, mostly because many of them outright say they are League of Legends fanfiction. However I like the characters you come up with and what back story and world building you've done so far is good.

Also Refill has an interesting super power. Very little sci-fi is written on beverages, aa nearly untapped frontier. scp-294 and scp-261 come to mind.

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