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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Story started off excellently and continued to to build. Then the end came, It should have ended earlier. With a the end of the session, a candid conversation about it between them and then a lingering passion filled kiss before he left with both feeling happiness, a want for more and a sadness all at the same time as he walked out the door. Or after they have sated their passion. An epilogue which describes the final painting and her fondness of the memory. But then again what the hell do I know.

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