All Comments on 'Posessions Ch. 01'

I thought it was hot. Not long enough but set the stage for more.

So far so good. However many stories degenerate from here into a bland blow by blow (or should it be lick by lick?) description of sex. You will need to be innovative to maintain my interest. Good luck!

I'm really eager to see what would happen next. Please don't give up on your story!