All Comments on 'Position of Trust'

A good story arousingly told. Thank you.

Excellent story! Well told and a lovely twist at the end

I really love your writing and this addition did not disappoint (and that's given how much I dislike the 50 shades phenomenon) XX

I am surprised at myself enjoying this harsher side of your imagination. It left me breathless.

Hot story, wish something like that would happen to me

I've read most of your stories and so far I like "Torrent" the best, although they are all good. As far as this story goes I didn't like the rape because that is what it was even though she enjoyed it.

It seems you have a good following of young, horny girls.

The elements of rape nearly turned me off but the pleasure both of them got from it had to turn me a bit around.

Ah, a fellow Sydneysider! I liked the story too. It's just not clear whether Julie had her orgasm, if at all. If she had an orgasm, then the story would highlight that. If she hadn't, after 24 hours of trying, then she wouldn't be so calm and evenly balanced at the end. You should write a third part, to give her what she needs.