All Comments on 'Possessing the Professor'

Can you add golden showers and have her smoke vs 120's.can you bring incest into the story by having to bed her mother. Thanks.

I did consider putting it in mind control, but the story I plan to grow into full blackmail.

And to the other commenter, I'm sorry but incest stories just are not my style, I don't like them

Would love to see this continue. Making her barefoot and naked at home at all times and in public at times would be fun. Make her come to school covered in her own pussy juice. Good job.

"Have her nude at home"

I had planned on doing that, a little thing to know about me is I'm submissive writing this story to surprise my master, he has me naked at home often

Unique premise. I like the idea of shifting from mind control to blackmail... Having her obey eventually without forcing her to enjoy it out think it's her own idea. I think it adds to the submission and humiliation. In fact, could be used to add to the paranoia, "oh my god, they know... they can tell... They could report me...I could lose my job...I could go to jail...I need to keep them quiet..."

Just make sure to take it slow. No fucking students or completely exposing herself to her class for a while. Lots of room for subtle humiliation to start with... Especially with access to her mind. Draw that out.

From a writing perspective, this is smooth and easy to read. I like how you've created the device to be able to sprinkle in some extreme fantasies to satisfy readers wanting more intense action while maintaining a real plotline that maintains some semblance of realism (mind jumping notwithstanding). Play with that and draw out those daydream fantasies some more... Add details and make them entire sessions in your chapters.

Looking forward to additional chapters.

The idea of doing things in public always kills a story, in my view. While we can accept that this guy is a freak with mind-control powers, the rest of the world seems pretty normal. Anything she does in private would be cool, but once you take it out in public, you're fighting a constant battle against everyone else in the world. There's just no way to have her doing freaky shit at school and not get fired. Someone will see it and call the cops or administration. Someone will ruin her career or get her arrested. Her friends and family will hear about this huge change in character and start asking too many questions.

Keeping it in private, though, allows you to do pretty much anything you want without stretching the suspension of disbelief past the breaking point. She could easily be enslaved and used at home. You could join with the local swinger/BDSM community to get a bit more freaky with it. She could film porn with a disguise and fake name.

The interesting part is the psychological conflict and unintended consequences.

Love where I think you are going. The main thing I hope you don't do, is listen to critics that tell you what not to do. This is your story, take advise if it helps, but don't let others lead you away from your story. If they don't like it, there are 1000s of other stories they can read!! Can't wait to hear the next chapter and let me know if you need someone to sound board ideas.

This is a great story. Take it where you want to, don't limit yourself to some of the user comments. Summer blackmail is a great series that has a large build up, but also takes a lot of commitment from the author. Tormenting Tina is another similar story that has done a great job of taking a scenario and finishing it shortly with excellent escalation. I look forward to following your story and seeing where it goes.

Hi everyone, thanks for the suggestions and comments, I'm just letting you know I have started the next chapter and I have taken on board some peoples suggestions in the way the story will escilate. Hope you like it when it goes up