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Click hereWave after wave of pleasure crashed against her. Like a rock battered on all sides by the sea, she was immersed in the sensation. It was violent, it shaped her, it was exquisite.
It went on and on and just when she thought it would never end, it did. It was over.
She panted, trying to catch her breath, her heart pounding as if she had run a marathon. Strong arms held her, stroking her bare skin, drawing out the last few sensual ripples.
Dmitri knew he had to leave her. He could not stay in her presence any longer. Not without grabbing her and fucking her against a wall. She had passion. She kept it hidden but it was there, ready and waiting to be called to the surface.
But he would not take her yet. He wanted to savour her, he wanted her willing and weeping to have him inside her. So, like Ivan, he decided it was time to leave.
When he was sure she was able to stand without his support, he released her abruptly and sprang away. Grazing past her on his way to the doorway, he paused when he was far enough out of eyeshot that she would have to turn to see him.
"Your bedroom is upstairs. On the first floor. Turn left on the landing, you will find it at the end of the corridor."
An instant later, Beth was alone. She felt hollow inside, bereft and lost. Only then did she crumble, collapsing into a heap amongst her piles of clothes, her shoulders shuddering as she was wracked with sobs.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agohe could have get her naked when he was alone making a naive virgin to undress in front of his friend was really harsh also why didnt ivan left earlier he only left after watching her complete naked and teased her by telling dmitry to take care of her really ?
both of them embarassed her and then after taking all the fum ivan decided to be a gentleman .no expectations from dmitry but i hate ivan more than dmitry
Anonymousover 9 years agoWhy was there no mention or notice by him of the supposed bruises on her body and face? Regardless of the lighting, the contrast of light and dark skin would be noticeable, especially up close.
nuerotiklyinclinedover 9 years agoThis story reads just like Seven Days by Soular. Yes you changed names, location and a few minor details but the bones of the story are still this same. Shame on you!
fantasylover25over 9 years agoOkay. I got past the first and second chapter thinking I've read this story before and then I remembered Seven Days by Soular. How vaguely ironic the Hero in this story force the Heroine to strip in front of his trusted friend and Seven Days had the very same concept. Even mention of the seventy thousand owed to the Hero but I'm going to continue reading along but as I said, how ironic.
taniariceover 10 years agoAuthorSo, finally managed to touch up Chapter 04 and had a really productive sick day (genuine - can't talk louder than a croak right now!) polishing Chapter 05 - 4 has been submitted, 5 is still a work in progress.
Enjoy!!!
kiwiplumover 10 years agoLove it, the tension and anticipation.
Slightly off putting to have her come that easily though, took me out of the realm of easy to imagine to made up.
Looking forward to next chapter though.
taniariceover 10 years agoAuthorHi folks - sorry I haven't had a chance to reply to all of this fantastic feedback - thank you so much for leaving your comments, it always motivates me to write just that little bit more.
@FA_JF - glad you're enjoying the realism. I'm an avid romance reader and relieved that people don't think this is just another stock plot that's too fantastic to be true. Also, you'll be glad to know I have just met Mrs Ivan - I think you'll love her when she turns up!
@Mayness - trying not to keep you in suspense too long! Let's just say I've rewritten a chunk of Chapter 5 and there are sparks. You'll be glad to know that Chapter 4 is turning out to be the longest yet and should be uploaded in the next week or so.
@Masterfuljim - am coming to the conclusion that for once Dmitri is lost without a game plan. Read into that what you will.
@Anonymous 'Not bad' - hope you stick around for the journey, your comments really helped me to shape the opening of the next chapter.
Will try to respond to some of the other comments you have left later - but I have read them all and they really to give me faith in my writing ability! As said above, next post date should be in the next week - hoping to get another chapter out this month - so will keep you informed when it is uploaded to the queue.
Tania x
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou know it's people like you that make this site worth coming back to on a regular basis. Yes I am begging you to continue to chapter 4. No I have no shame. I think I speak for a lotta people when I say we need it.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI am salivating waiting on chapter 4.
The comment on how she remains slender interests me. I have am working on my master's in public health/nutritional epidemiology and I had always believed that junk funk (aside from being highly palatable to many) was more affordable than healthier fare.
