All Comments on 'Possession is 9/10ths the Law Ch. 01'

excelent an well written a few typos but nothing serious keep going can't wait for the rest

Another nice story...thanks please dont ruin it by having him share his women.

Excellent this is the beginning of something that can be very good. Love the twist on the demon being a succubus. I also agree no sharing the women I hate it when authors do that.

This story has some great potential. I will look forward to seeing more of it in the future.

good read....good story line....can't wait for more.

I enjoyed this story a lot. Look forward to more now.

dayummm, I hope you have more ready to go and fire off more chapter, good story line . looking forward to more, ty

Great stuff. Love the mind control mixed with incest theme.

I think that you have a very,very good idea about continuing this story.Great premise with oh so many possibilities.

This story was hilarious. Especially when the demon was moaning & had its first orgasm lols. Keep it up!!!

Keep them cumming great story line

keep this going

it is a grate story i hand fun reading it so wright more.

Please please keep it going.

And including bondage, f@#king perfect.

'Slow down dude that's my MOM you are talking about...Ten minutes later....

Please don't allow this story to end here. It teems with possibilities.

damn good read! don't end it here!!

I hope that he makes it up to his mom for the year she spent without having sex and gives her 12 orgasms in the 24 hour period, and then just keeps on fucking her until she feels that she has made up for the sex she has missed even if it takes all year long.

Of course dad's out of the picure from now on and his mom is his little sex slut for life.

Thanks for the good start

Another vote for a long series! Well done.

I, too, hope that there is more to cum.

Dear Lost,

Keep the story going please. I love the "mystical" nature of your craft. Very imaginative and clever.

i liked the content of the story, the concept, dialogue, and flow. But you need a LOT of work on your punctuation. sentences are reading differently than you intend. Some other punctuation mistakes are making you look like a worse writer than the other story elements suggest.

i can't wait to read the next chapter!

Your writing makes me want to read more. Good start!

the first time around. I'm enjoying it!

Please continue