All Comments on 'Post Party Massage'

You did fine, with the well-written descriptive imagery, so that I could almost see and feel and even smell Alice in her no longer hidden sensuality... until you blew it at the end. Once you had your reader really seeing what was happening in the story, you had us see... a teenage boy, masturbating while sniffing his finger???

The shift from sensuality to disgust was enough to knock two stars off your story.

Nice story. I got stiff just reading it. Now I have to go and unstiffen it.

great story! one of my greatest pleasures in life is bringing a woman to orgasm. you did it twice! Would love to read the follow up to this story.

under those circumstances, the guy had to be an idiot not

to press the point.