All Comments on 'Post-Run Interlude of Lust'

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walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 17 years ago
Excellent well written and passionite and erotic!!

This is a well written story of love, passion, chemistry and the resulting high charged erotic sex! Super good job!

sherlock40sherlock40almost 17 years ago
I hope all of those "other" LW writers are paying

attention. This is what a loving wife story should be like. Erotic, wonderful and true to each other.

Gary_LostGary_Lostalmost 17 years ago
Very Erotic

Very good story it was what all married couples should experience every-now and then in there love live.

BlueFinchBlueFinchalmost 17 years ago
'Erotic Couplings', Shirley?

An outstanding story, but I always thought LW catagory was for affairs?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Very Good

Thanks for a really good story, not near enough of them. Keep it up!

BazzzBazzzalmost 17 years ago
Good story just not a Loving Wives story

I'm sorry to be another in a long line to tell you this but Loving Wives is for cheating wives. Those that try and inform you otherwise simply don't know about the Erotic Couplings category which is the perfect spot for this well done story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Bullshit

Ignore faggot Bazzzzzzieeee and put your story where you want it. That queer asseater doesn't know shit from shinola. You will find that to be true if you read one of his piss-poor submissions. Be sure and not eat before you do since his filthy trash will cause you to vomit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
This in erotic couplings, yes it might be, or it

could be in romance. Or even fetish with the smell of sweat being a turnon. But it is a definate Loving Wives story. Anybody that doesnt know that doesnt know anything. Cheating wives stories are actually nonconsent stories, since the husband cant know of the cheating and therefore the sexual activity of thw wife is without consent. If it is forced noncopnsent we have a space for that to. So dear readers, let us understand, and erotic coupling, with romance, and a bit of fetish, is a for real loving wife story. Make no mistake, we have enough nonconsent and interracial stories in loving wives now, without people with fetishes, not in bdsm, telling us what is a loving wife tale! Stories after all are written for the reader, and the reader is who determines the success or failure of the story. If you look at the poundings cheating wife stories in the loving wives section, you will realize they are mislabeled.

Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 17 years ago
Good stroke story.

Thank you.

Gus AsparGus Asparalmost 17 years ago
yummy

Very convincing, cock-hardening story - whoever Travis is, he's a lucky guy!

BazzzBazzzalmost 17 years ago
Still a good story

My apologies to the Author. By just trying to give some simple advice, (correct advice I might add), on where to put a well written story I seem to have let the Trolls out from under the bridge. As you could tell from my rating in my previous comment which category you put a story in has nothing to do with how I deem it's quality. Meanwhile I have one other suggestion. I wouldn't put my trust in advice given by trolls too effeminate to even leave their names on their comments.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One hell of a great story

Despite what some readers may say, this story definately belongs in "Loving Wives". Great plotline, consistent writing and some hot fucking sex prompts me to give a 100/100. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One hell of a great story

Despite what some readers may say, this story definately belongs in "Loving Wives". Great plotline, consistent writing and some hot fucking sex prompts me to give a 100/100. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One hell of a great story

Despite what some readers may say, this story definately belongs in "Loving Wives". Great plotline, consistent writing and some hot fucking sex prompts me to give a 100/100. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wrong category

This belongs in "Erotic Couplings".

"Loving Wives" is for cheating spouse stories.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 17 years ago
The ‘bus’ was nice but where was the '‘tour’?

First a response. Bazzz went with tradition, still I had to chuckle…

If this one was not about a loving wife I have never read one, but Bazzz is right of course, no truly loving wife is ever welcomed in the loving wives section… figures! (not). <P>

For me thought there was another little problem, in a different place. Ok, I think I just made up a joke to demonstrate my little problem. I said a joke; I did not say a good joke. Here goes. A group of tourist climbs over a wonderfully decorated, historically looking tourist bus. They sit there for a while as the bus driver attended to misc. things at the front of the bus. After fifteen minutes the driver proceeded to thank the waiting tourists as he announced that the tour was now over and any tips will be appreciated. “But there was no tour” protested the puzzled tourists. “Is that so?” responded the driver somewhat defensively, “and what do you call that?” he demanded as he moved his hands, pointing in all directions across the colorful bus. End of illustrative joke. <P>

I feel like one of these tourists. Wait a minute? This was very nice but I am not ready to get off. Where is my tour? The bus –I mean the story -has not moved an inch. Nothing happened. For al I know this couple does it every day in the rainy summer. The bus is fine and all but I still want a story – with or without strokes. I believe that once it moves, It could show us some really nice time too…

roscovichroscovichover 12 years ago
Well written.

Good luck in future stories.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Good story. Monogamous couples are the best couples.

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