All Comments on 'Postcards Ch. 03'

by pocketrocket

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Love these characters. I don't even care that a good portion of each scene is repeated when perspectives are switched. Here hoping that after postcards, you get inspired with a short novella regarding the movie editing and property group.

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
what i enjoy

i agree with the previous commentator how much fun is pr's writing style. And I actually enjoy the repetition of the character's POV's. Each person has a different perception of the action. That to me is interesting.

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 8 years ago
Military protocol.

As Sheila's importance was recognized I notices the subtle and not so subtle shifts in the way

they were treated. I love the way the passive and dominant positions changed almost non-verbally. I prefer a strong male presence, albeit a loving and caring one, although Sheila would be at ease in either position. Somehow I have missed the significance of the 'umbrella' reference. Judy

pocketrocketpocketrocketabout 8 years agoAuthor
The umbrella

Sean has the heavy flogger in the umbrella pouch of his briefcase. Once he showed it to Sheila, rain references took on a double meaning. This happened at one of the airports. It became a running gag between them.

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