All Comments on 'Potential'

What a beautiful story!

Thank you. Hope to see more from you.

What a beautiful story! It's very rare to read a story with such feeling. Thank you! More please!

This story was beautifully written. As a stright woman looking to fullfill a fetish i found that and more.Your story was touching and I enjoyed it a lot.

A lovely and well written story. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Like everyone else has commented, very well written. You truly captured essence of each character and made them believable. That's what I look for when reading the submissions. Every great once in awhile I like a Wham-Bam-Thank-You-Ma'am, but for the most part, I like the building up to and connection between the characters before the sex. It's all about the foreplay. And the sex? Oo-wee...I need a cigarette! Well done. I dearly hope that you will continue on with Mark and Ethan.

Thank you.

Very nicely written, you paint a beautiful and sensual story. I hope to read a lot more of your work.

Nicely drawn characters. You def should write more. Something longer. You clearly have the talent to do multi-chapters. I'll be on the look out. ;)

a good well written story but didnt feel finished to me hope to see a sequel

I was biting my pillow the entire time. I felt such romance, it was so refreshing. I'd like to point out though that somewhere on the second page, there was a mention of an Emmett. Just wondering if you meant Ethan. Anyway, great, great story!

it was a great story...i have a feeling that you are obsessed with twilight because you accidently called ethan, emmett...then you came from forks high school seriously it was a great story and you should write more but leave twilight out of it.

Hope their is more to come!!!

love this story hope there´s more to it... because it need to go on.. to good to just stop there...

a greate story, but hope there´s a lot more... pleasesssss

This story really is amazing - one of the best I have read. I hope you add another chapter sometime to really complete it. Thanks for the read!

I love this story - it would be wonderful if you continued it! I'd love to read more about these characters. Either way, you should definitely continue writing in some capacity - you're an excellent story teller :)

This is such a delightful story. Please keep writing!!!

Where's the rest? Why do the best writers on here leave things hanging???? Please give us some more. I want an Ethan of my own!

Please finish the story, it's so gooooood!

I want there to be more with these guys...please write another chapter.

You had a very good pacing in the story, and I was locked into the character's POV and wants/needs. Short and sweet; this was a wonderful little story. Great job.

Cruel & Unusual Punishment is what this is WITHOUT MORE of this story

You should write a novel, I know I would buy it and read it :D

Can you please make a part 2 of this story like what happens when they get back like the very next day I just loved it it was amazing lol keep writing ur good at it

Among those amazingly done stories that I love coming back to.

loved how through his sport you captured ethan at his best and most sensual and how mark responded to him. the end with his confessions on the road opened them up for a continued relationship once they got back to school. people are asking for more, but I think you left things on a good note, as you say potential for a happy more between them

I liked the story alot. It was well written bringing the world of competing in decathalon events alive. I only would have liked to see more follow-through on how did the actual article go once they got back. That was the point of them meeting and at the end, to tie in what Ethan said about his 'secret crush' and Mark having 'Potential.' overall, good read

as usual going along good until... "baby".. ugh....why does that have to used...babe is just as bad... lose that term...I quit reading after that...

... quite lovely indeed although it felt a little rushed nearing the end. It feels complete though. Adding more may water it down.

The emotions, the tension, the slow-burning drama.

Thanks so much.

I loved this story so much! I really wish it was either longer or there were more chapters showing what happened after they got back from the trip and how their relationship progressed. Definitely getting put in my favorites to come back and read again!!

Beautifully written story, loved every word.

Fantastic read, Five Stars times five