All Comments on 'Power'

Her final comments could have been even more shocking for him.

" When I went to the hotel with the man you saw, it was a business meeting. Your father was already there waiting for us, so you can give him the recording if you want.

I went along with your little game because I wanted you to fuck me, but I wasn't sure you really had the nerve."

A common plot device in this particular genre. But one of the better efforts.

The most erotic incest story between mother and son I have read in a long time. Thank you for sharing

Ed

Loved it!!!

I really enjoyed your story and I too wondered if there was a twist coming at the end. Maybe it wasn't the first time they'd met like this, playing a game. Maybe his father knew, even encouraged her to see other men. But that doesnt distract from the endding you chose which was every bit as good.

Pete.

I am at work reading this via iPhone. It was so hot I was sitting next to a co worker when I came in my boxers. I hope no one smelled the scent of musk...

Please, continue

wow a very hot story indeed. Loved it

not as good as the agreement but good.hope part 3 of agreement is forthcoming

Really appreciate all the feedback.

Considering drafting an alternative version with a different kind of ending. That would take tweaking how Andrea responded throughout the story. Might be intriguing to see another take.

Will take a shot at it, if there's enough interest in it.

Thanks again. Love hearing feedback.

Your story was so beautifully written - setting, dialogue, action - Pulsating, YES! Certainly scorched one's mind with your words! Please continue!

Very nice and well written story ..

The story for me was ruined by her piece of shit son. Regardless of the outcome this was still a form of rape on the part of the punk ass son. As a result I could only read part of the first page before becoming disgusted. To extort sex from one's mother is akin to rape and in some states could be charged as rape. Why do so many writers here have such disdain for their mothers?

Well written , worth reading, keep it up. I am looking forward to more of your stories.

incredible story, thank you for writing it.

Anal next time please

If she tells the father that he fucked her she now has blackmail on him because he forced her to fuck him so he would get in more trouble than she would be.

Very nice story of blackmailing.

Good writing, especially the opening sequence. The tension pulled me into the story, and the resolution was satisfying. In many ways...

Thank you!

-a

I read the 19 comments made before me and agree with most of them. I just want to add that you have a problem with tense sometimes. Proof reading and the use of a spell checker would have improved readability. Last, I found your avoidance of the use of common names for genitalia awkward and cumbersome. All that said, your story was very HOT! Thank you.

PS: To Anonymous who complained about the story being about rape - You didn't have to read it, moron! You were warned and CHOSE to read it!

Go for the prize and inseminate me!

I like this story and I am waiting on part two

A man whore and a scum of the earth whore of a mommy dearest. Yep let dumb assed daddy find out and put the slut on the curb absolutely pennyless...

interplay between mother and son as she gives in to his sexual demand is about as about as good as it gets.

Please add another chapter to this hot as hell Mom son story! Screw the Grammer police, just keep writing hot stories.

A very well written and very hot story! Thank you!

For a sub-genre of mother/son incest that I'm usually not particularly attracted to (A bit more non-con than I'd like my reluctance in general.) this was very hot.

Good job and I'm anticipating your next story!

Your improvement as a writer from your early stories to your latest is incredibly impressive. Congrats.

A very minor note: you frequently use the word “glimpsed” and it is often awkward. You might want to consider a substitute such as “glanced”. Or maybe you just have a thing for glimpsed. Whatever floats your boat. Cheers.

Quick get the fire extinguisher, this story is so hot I spontaneously combusted! A solid five

Yep! We need a lot more like this. Thanks a bunch.

Try as I might, I could not find any tag or warning on your story that would warn of the level of reluctance this mother had. This was rape, through and through. Unfaithfulness does not make this permissible. Please add warnings and tag appropriately.