All Comments on 'Power... Girl? Ch. 02'

I like the little plot twists as things go along, but it would be better if you drew the action out a bit longer so that the main characters' relationships and personalities are better established before they hit a major turning point in the plot sequence. If you don't, then it diminishes the effects of the consequences of the main characters' actions, both for the characters in the story and the audience as well. I have some idea of how I think the story might be going, but either way, I really hope there will be many more chapters before the story's conclusion. I could totally see this as a comic, by the way, and it would be so cool if InCase was the one to draw it. I love his artwork. If you haven't already, you should really look up another artist on HentaiFoundry called Anasheya - I guarantee you'll love her stuff too. An author on this site, ruwild, wrote a story called "Stolen Away" using her input, and she's apparently working on drawing the manga for it as well.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

hotter than the first!

Loved this too. Really hot

Far to often tgirl stories focus on lesbian relations it's nice to see a well written one done with a girl guy dynamic

It took a single paragraph to get him to betray Power Girl? That's a deal breaker.

This needs to continue as that's quite the cliffhanger

Please write more! With only two stories you've become my favorite author.

I love this story ❤️

Been so long hopefully we get a sequel