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Click hereJayna looked down at the girl. She felt only mean, cruel intentions toward her. Her voice was thick with angry poison. "Let me tell you some shit, Sugar. All my life I been mistreated by cutesy little honky bitches like you." She picked up the bottle of champaign. Holding it be the neck, she pressed the flat round base against Marci's mound. Marci flinched from the cold, but held her position. Jayna emphasized her new pet name for Marci, "Well, Sugar, it's payback time."
- COMMENTS
Aussie1951about 2 years agoSorry, but I was very disappointed with this whole story . The stories concept was good but poorly executed, started off well enough but well down hill with each chapter. No wonder you never continued on with this story with all the bad criticism you received… Overall ⭐️⭐️
PornGoddess2almost 4 years agoI decided to see if the third installment might be an improvement of the second.
It's not.
The only way this story could be saved {well, made less putrid} would be for the devil to show up in person and treat Eric to the sort of shit he's heaped on other people.
Anonymousover 4 years agoOne of the basic rules of writing magic is that either the magic should have limits, or there should be a disincentive to using it. Otherwise, there’s no tension, since all conflicts are immediately resolved. Also, I agree with the other commenters about the last part.
sexymeupabout 6 years agoyou clearly don't like women to abuse them like you did and the racist crap was totally uncalled for this didn't even deserve 1 star. your best bet is to never write any more stories ever again. you are one sicko for sure that needs to be locked up and have your dick and balls cut off.
