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KMB2476KMB2476over 12 years ago

A very nice start to what seems to be another wild series from you MTL. One little suggestion though. I would revise the title a little bit because neither the title nor the description indicates that this is a Chuck story.

That being said, it's got the hot, raunchy action you specialize in and it's a very nice, short story. I look forward to seeing where you go next.

pope32767pope32767over 12 years ago
I don't think that matters

I have no clue who these characters are, and never heard of Chuck. It's still a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome!

I'm a huge Chuck fan and fancy Sarah Walker like a rabid dog. So I pronounce this possibly the greatest story ever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Oh man, please, please tell me there will be more of this? You need to make this into a series! I would love to read more adventures of Sarah and her bitch. Great!

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I am not a professional writer and welcome constructive criticism. Any stories I write that are loosely based on a celebrity or TV character comes from a place of fan worship and boredom. My stories feature themes of predominantly one woman dominating another. Strap-on anal se...

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