All Comments on 'Praying for Rain Ch. 02'

So well done! Thank you!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

He's trying to exorcising whatever demons are chasing him by plowing her. Sadly, she will wear out and be fed up before he achieves salvation. Many promising relationships have ended this way. Hope she is able to enlighten and save him from himself before he crushes her spirit. :-)

Definitely look forward to the next chapter. Thank you

Wow, I never would have predicted the scene on the porch or the end of the chapter. Nice writing, nice job in keeping readers in suspense. I don't envy your task of making the next chapter(s) as good or better. This story could end here or could go in so many different directions. As a writer trying to top chapter 2, I could see myself with 4 or 5 starts and getting frustrated every time. I wish you clarity in your writing vision.

I gave the first chapter a harsh review but wanted to see where this went. Predictable drivel. The whole idea of story telling is to suspend disbelief. So this "man" finds mentally compromised females who "willingly" provide sex for rent. LMFAO. This thing is a farce.