by Member389
It read like just sex, no love. He seemed like a cold bastard. The ending could have been much better
but it works. My imagination can take it from here. Good story.
Well I read and rated this one before, but didn't comment. I just finished the re-read and if i could give more stars I would. I will say this though, this story deserves more chapters, Jules and Jay have more ....... hope you consider adding to this story....
You have conjured up a lovely tale with the sensitive ingredients of trust, decorum and passion doled out in varying doses. The end product is immensely pleasing but I wonder why you hide under such an impersonal name?!
Very nicely written tale. Thanks for sharing a bit of your craft!
I really enjoy your work and I hope you can build off of these characters because you have created such a great story line and dynamic between them.
Keep up the excellent writing.
This was a wonderful start to a great story. Lots of obstacles to overcome to keep everything fresh and interesting. Convincing Jules mother, problems with his ex, lots to explore. I could easily understand why he was afraid of falling in love with her. Thanks for a great story
I hope for more chapters, they should have aa full fledged Romance
Thanks for the story. Good to read about a nice guy who meets someone who recognizes and appreciates that in him. Will there be more, I wonder??!