All Comments on 'Predator in Suburbia'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it but this site isn't littwist. Would have preferred it play out and he actually convert the entire neighborhood.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good

Good story. Better than most. Just wish you knew about new. There is a difference.

Funny thing about words; they mean something.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Don't stop now

The control and adventure in BDSM, public, humiliation, dressing these slaves in

slut , whore attire in public is open.... use it.. The adventure has only begun

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
should be a movie

Hollywood needs to buy the rights to this, it is a plot good enough to be a movie or maybe on HBO. You should follow this up with another using the remaining charactors. Nice writing style, erotic, and great plot. This has everything a literotica reader wants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Your stories are well written and incredibly hot!

Highly recommended user. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Justice - I like it!

It was hot and sexy, but the "street justice" at the end was good, too.

Ghost BearGhost Bearover 19 years ago
Enjoyed the story

Nice twist at the end.

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