All Comments on 'Predator or Prey'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Very erotic, and descriptive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very sexy 😏

This was very well written. I could see the story unfold before my eyes. Very sexy, seductive, and a great turn on 😏

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sequel soon, please.

I would love to read the actual sex, plus what they do afterwards to this 5 star introduction

AEisMeAEisMealmost 8 years ago

Great build-up. Very sensual and lush. Really hope this is the first chapter in a series.

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Black wings spring from the palest flesh, a single blood red feather curling from within and laying like a wound in promise: Darkness and light aligned, side by side. Playful? Yes. Loyal? Always. Safe,... that depends who you ask.