All Comments on 'Preeti's Corporate Restructure'

by Alucarda

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

Interesting morality story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not the usual fare ... but strong thrill

Dirty Batman socks ... are .... well ... an interesting fetish. Far beyond any mainstream vanilla sex appeal.

But like Maxwell, Thumb, JSMT or Cathartico this author explores innovative plots around humiliation, degradation and transformation themes. Quite imaginative, well-crafted and a strange but strong thrill factor - kind of a forbidden fantasy.

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Top story

Great addition

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great edition

Love this type of story great downfall

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice plot

very nice and interesting plot on this one.

themanredthemanredabout 6 years ago
Brilliant again

Wow I love the continued image of 'debooting.' Although I prefer the girl run around in socks, what you did is really great. This passage in particular:

"Ashamed to tell her friends what was going on at work or at home, Preeti became more isolated from her old acquaintances. Drinking, smoking weed and eating cheap unhealthy food took its toll on her body and mind.

Every day after work Preeti wanted only to drink and get high. This only contributed to her ongoing submission at work. All ambition she had once harbored diminished as Preeti slowly turned into a demotivated, bratty stoner. A business executive?! Preeti's only real hope for the future was being able to work a job and actually get paid a living wage while not showing off her chubby ass! "

Is just such a great sequence on downgrade and humiliation. You've dealt with the essence of the genre here. Fantastic work.

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Gothy trans-femme. I love getting dressed up only to be stripped down. I write twisted little stories about my own niche kinks. All written purely for my own gratification. Feedback welcome.