by erotowriter
a true loving wife. stories like yours are pretty rare in this site, let alone this category.
short, but i did find it erotic. well done!
We have a rare thing a loving wife story with no cheating. I am very sorry I half expected the wif eto be pregnant by somebody else I am really happy to be proved wrong!.
Great job. Two people really in love and the wife is actually having her and her husbands baby. I like the no wimp husband no cuckold approach here. Well done.
Very, very well done. You did a marvelous job of conveying the emotion between them and how it intensifies their erotic moments. Thank you!
If a heart felt smile was your intent, then you accomplished your goal. Well thought out and written. It reminded me of the look on my wife's face when she opened her eyes to look at the test result of our first child twenty four years ago. Thanks for reminding me of that memory. Don
Great subject and well done.<P>
Life like in a very touching word picture.<P>
Thanks Authoress.<P>
With Regard
Hey, Babe.....you do know that your pussy will take more than one cock's sperm, don't you? If that one cock won't make you pregnant, maybe you need to experience another one and another one and another one until you get knocked up? Have some fun outside of your marriage, and then you can always come back to your unsuspecting hubby who will raise the rug-crawler with you and give it his name.
I don't think they read the stories before the slams begin. Sperm Donor?
Well done, I hope you'll try a longer story, challenge yourself with a plot and a message, you'll grow as a writer.
You did a great job of building to a tragic end, and then wound up with a happily ever after. Thanks for a touching read!