All Comments on 'Prehistoric Mating'

I love your writing style, especially at the beginning. I'm not usually a fan of the mixed first and second voices (prefer one or the other, but not both) but you did a good job with it. Both the sex and the non-erotic parts (particularly the set-up descriptions) were well-written. The characters were engaging and you seemed to meet the guidelines well. Kudos, mate.

I very easily imagined this scene through your writing and it very erotic.