All Comments on 'Pretend For Me Ch. 04'

please make your chapters longer!

Stop rushing! An editor will help with that along with the many errors!

Your opening line:

The next day when Adam went into work at 9 am he went straight to the office to speak to Adam.

Adam went to speak to himself?

It was a good although short yet again chapter,,,but ,,,cat wakes lexi up telling her its almost noon,,then after she gets up and gets a shower and goes downstairs,,its time for the mail,,,and she says it must be 10;30,time for the post,,not that close to noon,is it..

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Looking forward to where this goes.