by nami
Well crafted story with a good plot. I enjoy stories like this in which the emotions that the characters experience are just as important as what takes place between them.
It is unusual to find someone who can fully express real love, and feelings of uncertainty this well. The writing is very good. The plot is well thought out. The author reminds us all that true love is not necessarily limited to sex. This is a very good read.
That was a beautiful story that you wrote. I love how you show the emotions between the two women from early on until after the baby was born. It was nice to see the honesty between the two women at the end of the story.
I hope that this story wasn't a fantasy. If you have actually experienced such a rare kind of love, then you have been truly blessed.
I hope this was only the first installment, as I would love to hear the further experiences of the two friends. Is there anything more exciting than the first encounters & exploration? Your story was extremely well-written with realistic dialogue & characterization. Thanks for sharing your talents!
This story is, without a doubt, one of the best ones I have ever read. It is tender and loving, and so beautifully captures the unique love between two women. I certainly hope you continue to write stories like this - you have a true gift!
I have read many stories on here and this is by far the best. I keep coming back to it. You made it so realistic and sweet that I can't help but tear up. Keeping writing and hopefully we can get a sequel to such an awe inspiring story. Much love Ashley.
This is one of the best lesbian romance stories I've ever read in this site. Please write more. And if you can spare the time, please write a sequel for this wonderful story. I would love to know what's happening with the "Prettiest Family".
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. The characters were amazing they worked so well together and they were perfect for each other. I wish there was a second part.
...that hasn't already been said? If I went deeply into what I thought of this story, I'd very quickly run out of superlatives. It was simply beautiful, Nami. Now why the hell don't you write some more for this site because there is real talent there. Don't waste it!
Brian
This tender story was so sweet, beautiful, and emotional. Very, very well done. I would love to read more.
What a beautiful way to end up together and being so in love. The mind doesn't have the power to fulfill the true love one can feel for another, only the heart can determine the true nature of that intimacy and that goes for any relationship. Two women together and in love is the most beautiful thing ever and they should never be ashamed of coming out. Lesbians can be tough on each other but with so many beautiful women in this world that makes it tougher for them. Thank you for your beautiful story that was obviously written with an awesome imagination and experience.
On the surface this is a romantic story with a happy ending.
A deeper read reveals a relationship based on codependency (enabler & codependent)
Blazing hot like the sun - eventually it burns out.