All Comments on 'Pretty Baby Ch. 03'

Please keep going with this story, it is very engrossing. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us!!!

Your writing is just getting better and better. A raw, emotional chapter which had my pulse racing with anxiety for Alyssa.

I'm off now to read Chapter 4.

janiexx

I did naughty things in the beginning and then just sat back and read the rest of the story. . . Wow. I am in awe of your talent. You are amazing. ~ Red

Really love your writing. The sex is great, and the characterizations are top notch.

Still, I kind of want something truly horrendous to happen to Gary. Self-righteous, hypocritical asshole that he is. Seriously, fuck Gary.