by Nothinglikethesun
Please take this farther. I loved every bit of it, good references and hot descriptions. More more more.
Act one was good. Where is act two and three? Be patient and work. This is good.
Act one was good. Where is act two and three? Be patient and work. This is good.
I'd definitely read more should you post it. It seems like it'd be a very cute series. :)
So...because Freddie Mercury died of AIDS, Queen is totally ambiguously gay? This comment was a major turn-off for me, since it's like a false cause fallacy. The false connection made between gays and AIDS is usually used by religious extremists in order to justify their hatred for homosexuals. Your use of it reminded me of this, therefore detracting from the story (and it's hard for me to respect characters/people that use false arguments anyways).
Loved the story. Guys never write about kissing another man. A guy will drop and suck a perfect strangers cock, but wont kiss him? Does that not seem wrong? I have gotten over that phobia. I don't however really like how men kiss. There is entirely to much tongue and open mouth. I like to kiss while fucking and getting fucked. More kissing stories, please!