All Comments on 'Pretty in Pink Ch. 01'

But thank you for being so explicit up front about the content of the story. Wasn't in the mood for a consentual forced cd story at. Hope to remember this story later when I am.

TayJK

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This is exactly what I was needing! Not too much build up, clear word use and all my little kinks wrapped in one! This got me going and needing more. Can't. Wait for the next.

Thoroughly enjoyed it. I liked hearing it from the girl's point of view. Only wished it was longer.

Awesome story, one of the best i have read on here, i hope you write more

So looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you so much. You guys are so sweet! I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad people are having fun reading it. The plan is to somewhat gradually build up the intensity as Erin & Thomas' relationship grows. Most chapters from here on out will be closer to three Lit pages as opposed to two, so hopefully that will help. The comments are very encouraging and I very much appreciate them!

A really top-class, well-told story yet again. You do write some delightful stuff! Thank you -- five stars, and please bring us Part Two very soon!

Keep it going- can't wait for the next chapter!

My wife likes me in lingerie and nighties. I wish she would let me go all the way

Makeup, wig, shaved chest with glued on forms then

with her pegging me I think that might be my ultimate fantasy come true.

And pet him? Where's his collar? Ugly story

Well writen. We'll see. I'm waiting for next chárters. I think that I will love this story.

Can't wait for the next chapter . Well writ in and i love the pace .

I hope that you will write more of this excellent story of self discovery.

A great start to what looks like turning out to be a very interesting discovery for both of the characters. Very well written and could not fault any part of it. Well done and I look forward to the following chapters and where you take this story.

I love that this story is from a female perspective! Well written!

This story was so well crafted! Realistic fears that really humanized the characters and made me empathize. I love stories that not only turn me on, but also make me think about the social dynamics of these situations in a realistic way. There are far too many stories that give us unrealistic expectations of real life encounters of kink.

The way the Tommy reacted when Erin was all cool about it was realistic as fuck. To be honest the character of Erin is what I want as my girlfriend. Like I'am into femdom and stuff but you see haven't found anyone who would take things as casually as Erin did here. But then again this is a work of fiction and my dream girlfriend will stay in my dreams. But bro this was simply a masterpiece. Well written. Definitely waiting for the next part. Keep it up. ❤️

I really want to read more of this, and soon!

This is the best femdom erotica I have ever read. The characters are completely believable, their reactions very much in the realm of reality. You have a real gift!

Hey, guys!

Thanks so much for all of your comments and support; it really is appreciated! I have just submitted Pretty in Pink Ch.02 and it should appear on the website in 2-7 days. It's a little late, which I apologize for; occasionally, life bitch slaps you, lol. Please continue to leave feedback if you have any constructive criticism for me. I am especially interested in knowing whether or not I go into too much detail and/or don't provide enough, so if you have strong feelings on that, let me know. Oh, and have a great week!

LKN<3

that was a great beginning cant wait too read more.this is something i've fantasized about for a long time

Loved the story.

I loved this story....and your writing is, well, suffice to say I am about to read everything of your I can find. Thank you!

Enjoying how Erin is discovering her lust and desire to be dominant and take charge.

Thiz chapter has stirred Crissy's Tessies🍒🍒 into a drenching SissyGasm !!! My panties r drenched, and I'll be stepping into some Dry PANTIES....;-) A deliciously arousing story for this PantyBoi.....thx for your erotic Story........ xoxoxo

delightfully refreshing.

dang good writing, 4 stars

Hi Leandra. Have ever wondered, hey, should I write more chapters of this series? The answer is yes! :)

This was so good…headed straight to chapter 2.

I need a minute to catch my breath. That is brilliant!

This story got me hard as suckitnow. Yes please let you catch a little cock sucker femboi pantyhose leggings panties bras and any silky boobs and cocks to play with little sissy powder loving mommy's panty boi since u years old doing his thing I wish I would have been caught by a woman or a man or plural. I am so horny for cock right now. Thank you for the story