by Stephanie_Rose
The Best ever written story not one error at all ,
the feeling Jolene was feeling in that town while working with that Archie even when he tells Jolene to come back in to the diner so he can solicit her out and the sheriff and his deputy should be fired for looking the other way .
I'll say it again: Great story, well written! Thanks
A few very minor spelling/grammar errors, but otherwise fantastic, amazing how one little bit of luck can change a life.
I hate to be a creep about this but I came and I cried lol it was so romantic but edgy at the same time and I truly appreciate the continuation of the story past the sex
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...........mmmmmoooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee, this needs a continuation, make it even more romantic...pleaseeeeeeeeeee