by Bella_Seni
Once again, great job! A nice addition to your first story. It seems pretty obvious that you are going to continue this story with another chapter and I eagerly await being one of the first to read it! I also enjoyed the picture on your profile! I hope that you have more like it!
Again, a moment of pleasure :) Five stars for sure and wanting more.
I actually think Recession is your best but this is just fun for all the family, good simple fantasy. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC.
great story love reading this one fantastic writing great story. reading this was like being their watch all the
action going on.
Great story, I would wish for a third chapter..
Hi Bella
Yet another great story, we need to see more!
As for your profile picture, one sexy lady or should I say 'Minx'
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Its a great story and I hope there's more. I hope they all have sex together and Jan and Brittany end up pregnant.