All Comments on 'Prim, Savage, and Anonymous'

This is a very good story. Super good. Please, please, please update? I'm begging you, it's super fucking hot, please tell us what happens next.

This definitely needs a sequel.

That was so incredibly hot! I loved every second please please please write a sequal?

engaging plot

interesting characters

well written.

much enjoyed

To be honest, I found this story(if it could actually b called 1 worthy of it's name..) outright disgusting & so terribly foolish! It is very poorly edited(can't wager what the so-called 'voluntary editors' at Literotica were doing) & the author..angel or whore whichever way it might've been is, i.e., relying on my observations; more full of silly pretenses & obsessions than actual imaginative & constructive faculties....1 could as well curse oneself after having read the story as 2 y he/she read it in the 1st. place....but this is solely my take & opinion on the subject. Thanx for taking the pain of reading it, take care, enjoy....

A pleasant intro to what promised to be a charming new series depending on the future direction taken. I’m baffled by the vicious & seemingly unprovoked comment by poet_looking. True, there are frequent typos yet those are easily corrected by a careful editor. However that hardly seems to warrant a personal attack or calling someone a whore, especially since the aforementioned critic doesn’t know the difference in usage between it’s & its. BDSM readers are usually much more tolerant & considerate toward each other. This is more the kind of comment I’ve come to expect in LW.

Great potential. I do not mind the typos, the story has a great premise and it was written in a very teasing way. Please continue, it will be interesting to see what you have in store for the next encounter :)

5stars

why not a 2nd part yet?