All Comments on 'Prima Nocte Ch. 03: The Best Laid Plans'

by Pelwrath

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Willing to take on an older woman with a couple of young children? More courage than I had when I was 21. Great story; 5 stars for all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ending left me wondering

He has spilled his guts, but she has left the reader in doubt as to their future. Seems to me that after chapter one, this series was in the wrong category.

PelwrathPelwrathalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I want to thank Oldnakeddad for helping me with editing and some suggestions. Next to all those who've been following Abby and Vince. Thanks very much for reading, rating and commenting on them. I hope you've all have enjoyed this series.

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