All Comments on 'Primal Frontiers Ch. 02'

BUT IT'S A RERUN ,NICE TRY

I'm glad you like the story but I don't know what you mean by a rerun. I can assure you that it is 100% original. I resent that comment because I really put a lot of time into my story. Please explain.

There has to be one more to show how it ends.

You had to add blueballs? I had to stop there.

Blueballs is not a real thing. Its some made-up shit that guys use to try and get girls to bang them.

The story was great till that came up and ruined it.

As a man, I can tell you from experience that blue balls is a real thing. A shame you stopped just before the end of the story - you missed the best parts. Kind of ruined it for yourself.

they find this shelter by accident but the rescuers found it the next day like the had a it planned out?

please have him cum inside her. i love it when my son cums inside my hot mommy hole. ;-)

amazing story. very different to other lost in the wilderness stories . very believable . A fantastic build up with great sexual tension. 100% genuine this is not a copy. newk99rky at tumblr

I thought this was a very good story, right until the last paragraph. What the heck was that and where did it come from? Hoping for a happy ending!

by the comment of the mother who wrote "in the next chapter." This lady says, "please have him cum inside her. i love it when my son cums inside my hot mommy hole. ;-)." What an understanding and truly loving mother. There are lots and lots of sons who'd like nothing better than to revisit their mother's "mommy hole," that wonderful hairy hole between their mother's legs they came out of. For many a boy nowadays nothing can compare with sticking his big hard cock up his own mother's cunt as an expression of the boundless love for the woman from whose body he came into the world. And for his mom having her boy's young cock stuffed up his own birth canal and fucking it with all his youthful energy and strength melts her motherly heart and makes her cunt run like a river. Her darling baby boy is back home, back up where he started out and where he belongs, now and forever. When he blows his hot young balls up his own mother's warm wet twat, and gives his beloved mom the precious gift of his creamy semen, like this lady she experiences the ultimate joy of the total reunion of mother and son.

Please continue. More intense love and exotic location and situations. Thanks for this passionate story.

Thanks again for the feedback. There will be a third chapter and possibly more so stay tuned everyone.

...with great characters and a lot of possibilities for future chapters - not only one more... ;-)

Great story. There's clearly a lot of detail given to not making it unbelievable. They took their time, and the build up was, although somewhat farfetched, much less than other stories. They didn't just get right to the point, their passion reached critical after building for so long...and that made all the difference.

The story is precisely the kind of emotional release I needed sexually. Thank you.

He gets to orgasm and he pulls out? Seriously? How anti-climatic....

Loved it when mom cried,

"Ooh yeah -- bust that fuckin' nut, baby!

Bust it all over me, yeah!"

and just like mommy's good little (big) boy,

I most certainly did !

I really like the story and hope you will continue with it. Many great avenues to investigate and travel. Rock it.

Fortunately the story is rather well written; the characters play their roles well. There is caring of the mother and son from the point of parent and child but also, as man and woman--once son Brian gets beyond his inexperience and the experience of mother Karen, which is normal when one partner is a fuck-virgin, as is Brian.

It's unbelieveable that it takes two great rounds of son Brian fucking his mother Karen before he get "get his rocks off", blow his load fucking his first pussy, vagina, pumping poontang! Worse yet, he has the best mind-blowing fuck of of a man's life--Brian's virgin, fucking LIFE--and he has the wherewithal to pull his dick from his own mother's pussy and ejaculate all over her torso, but lacking the balls and basic natural instinct to cum in his first ever entry into a deep, willing and accepting pussy. For reader's of softcore pornography, this story is a classic good read. For lover's of long-lasting, long-term blood-relative, mother and son, father and daughter and/or brother and sister incestual relationship of the familial partners with consummating sexual partners, this story doesn't do it!

It's pretty obvious you are posting as Anonymous, then submitting new posts to comment on your anonymous ones... so strange.

More please.

These two chapters could stand as a single story or be serially continued. Love it as it stands. Characters could be time jumped forward and continued as well following a rescue..

Without a doubt the best story I've read. Lots of drama, passion, right up to the end. Good Job!

"Karen estimated him to be about eight inches in length and at least six inches around"

Another story with a guy with an 8 inch dick and this time it's six inches around. Pretty big circumference to length ratio there. What a crock. When it comes to dick size, some authors just can't seem to be realistic. Good luck on finding any woman that's brave enough to take on something like that. Unless the guy likes using it to screw a large bovine animal.

Descent till the ending!

It was a 5 star story all the way until the very end that where you killed it for me..Sorry ⭐️⭐️⭐️ only...

Beautiful love story. The sexual and emotional epiphany between mother and son was remarkable. The adoration, passion, sensitivity and intimacy was touching, logical and beautiful. A 5 star rating without reservation..