All Comments on 'Primal Need'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A beginning.

With promise, perhaps, but just a beginning.

visioneervisioneerover 8 years ago

You submerge the reader totally into her surrender of control with beautiful, almost lyrical descriptions of her emotions. Outstanding.

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