All Comments on 'Prince Charming Ch. 4'

Very unique and exciting fantasy.

I read the entire "prince charming" series just today... and I have to say that although some of your writing doesn't quite fit my taste exactly, this particular piece was most entertaining. I especially enjoyed the amazon negotiators final statement.

Cheers, good job!

I hope there will be more

You had the beginning of a terrific story if only it hadn't become so repetitive. Chapter one was great....two really good and continued building the readers interest but then it just kept replaying itself. You needed a tad more exspansion of the story line. Of course if you only read one chapter at a time, each was very good in itself. Each chapter I gave you a 5 but over all only a 4. lol Not too shabby!

Thank you. I enjoyed reading your stories over all.

the other stories were great awesome even, but this one fell very very short. you need more .

its a great store add more. would love to see if he nocks up both woman lol. good job

Please continue this series, and make them longer! And let our poor king last longer.