All Comments on 'Princes and Pawns Ch.1'

Was going fine until you introduced race into it. We really do not want to know whether people were black or not. Suggest you withdraw them and edit references to skin colour. Sooner Literotica makes this a general rule the better.

but to the other reviewer, what are you talking about? There is no mention of race, just his black attire.

First of all, to the race conscious critic, he nevver said the MAN was black, he said the man was the black killer of the Green Prince. Read a little Shakkespeare, and stop trying to find idiocy where it does not exist.

Now, to the author, I like the story concept, even the machiavellian reference, but here's a thought, just because you learn a new word every day does not mean you should use it! Ease up on the descriptiveness, you're not at all adept at the art.