All Comments on 'Princess Ch. 03'

WELL DONE!!!!!!

Initially, I really like sisters, friends &lovers. But as the story progressed I felt it suffered from character bloat, and that the group love aspect swelled to the point that it diminished the relationships between the principals. The inclusion of Marjorie made me wary, and now Jerry has me more nervous.

It is just my opinion, but I am really liking this story thus far.

as i was reading, i felt (also) that the introduction of Margorie was a little early and extra to the plot.... then Jerry jumps in, to enhance the plot... but fear not fellow readers... this author has maintained several polyamorous affairs in other stories.. Jim and Carrie will win out in the end. however not sure if as Prince Jim and Princess Caroline or as two non-descript although wealthy Americans... Great work, more to come?

Really liked the first two chapters but sadly almost becoming another sisters/friends story, shame.

What happened to chapter 2???9

However, it has gone from 1 to 3 with no chapter two. It wouldn't be so bad if it wasn't for the fact chapter 3 goes straight into the story and introduces characters I know nothing about and confuses me. Until there is a 2 that fills in the gaps, I am not going to read this series. When chapter 2 finally makes an appearance, then I'll come back.

Look under Biography:

About the story, "Princess." All chapters were submitted, but someone reported this as plagiarized from another website (stories online.net). It wasn't, since I publish on multiple sites. Lit pulled Ch. 2 and has yet to replace it or post Ch. 7 which has also been submitted, now with explanations about why someone was in error - all this and nearly 10 days have passed since I submitted the stories! Uhhhhh!

I do not know when Steve posted this...... but this what happened... I too would like to read chapter 2 myself..

When chapter 2 gets put back up. I'll finish reading it then. I got lost from chapter 1 to the beginning of chapter 3

I'd of dumped Carrie(Caroline) as-soon-as she started to have sexual feelings for Marge. One woman kind of guy, I don't like sharing, especially the woman I'm in a relationship with.

Now that he has introduced us to the Natchez Trace, I suppose that the next travelog in the next chapter will be Chicago to LA via US 66. Stopping for sex in St. Louis, Oklahoma City, Amarillo, Albuquerque and on to LA. Who knows where they will go in the following chapters maybe up PCH I toward SF and then Sacramento and north.

Like the story up until the cuckolding fantasy. Makes him a pussy.

Dumbest story EVER

Nope. -5 stars. This fell apart so fast. Stopped really reading when they introduced Jerry. Too bad you ruined a good story.

Story has been good for the mist part. However, in this chapter, I'm not crazy about brining Jerry into the lovefest.