All Comments on 'Princess Ch. 04'

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arrowglass almost 9 years ago

What a place to stop!

Just making my addiction worse!

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Climate Change?

She should do a story on how two miles of ice over Chicago will make travel in the region difficult.

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

interesting story

Thanks for keeping the follow up chapters coming without too big a delay

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

princess

Keep going

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Name switch

You used Emma for Marjorie on page 3 during the restaurant scene - "Both Jim and I have a romantic relationship with Emma".

Enjoying the story. Nicely done.

Fseries almost 2 years ago

Still nope.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting story, but I really don't like Jerry's involvement beyond being a bodyguard. Drops the story from a 5 to a 3

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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