All Comments on 'Princess Chelsea'

Poorly written, terrible dialogue and so implausible I'm still scratching my head. When he gets home, cut the cage off and get rid of her contact numbers. Unless he is going to go over again and beat the snot out of her. That I'd like to read about. But this was worthless drivel.

Why do people read a chastity story then leave shitty comments?? I loved your story and gave it 5 stars. It was well written and super hot. I look forward to more chapters. Thanks for sharing your work!

Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it! I have plenty of ideas buzzing around on where I may take this one.

cant wait to read the next part.

This had me at the edge of my seat anticipating what she was going to do to him next. Very hot story. I'm going to save this one for my Wife to read. Or maybe I shouldn't give her any ideas.... lol

Looking forward to more of this tale... ignore the guys who bust their nut and then feel shame, comment with hate. They'll be reading your next part as well trust me.

Keep those ideas a buzzing! Can't wait to see what he goes through now that he's locked up! I know I can't keep my mind off my girl when we play this way, and that's only seldom! Great start and hope to read more soon

Thanks for the great comments! It's much more than I could have expected. I'm around halfway through the next chapter, so hopefully I can get it out soon.

I liked your story enough to link it on my Tumblr... Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for all the wonderful ideas of what to do to my hubby as I get more and more into FemDomme :).

Chapter 2 has been submitted! Hopefully it will be approved around the end of the week! This chapter is going into humiliation, and will hopefully set up the rest of the story.

There are very few really good femdom stories on this site, and excellent femdom stories are very rare, but a gem of a story is rarer still. Great work!!

Thank you for that compliment! Hopefully the next chapters won't disappoint.

I failed to vote on Chapter 1 and to leave comments on any. This has been a really good story through Chapter 3 and I am really looking forward to more.

Thank you for voting and commenting. I still have more coming, I've just been extremely busy lately and haven't had a chance to really tear into Chapter 4 yet. I'm getting there though.

Wonderful story so far, i like it very much!

The story is reasonably well written with only a few grammatical errors. The content however is just silly. Not erotica just sadism, with it reading like a shopping list. He would be in hospital after that treatment not simply driving home.